Surrender This Desire
Crows surround me—
they sense—
internal velocity.
Thoughts race—
ribs fracture.
I suffer—
Desire—
current—
like lightning.
I weave through
swaying wires—
one wrong breath—
ash—
Your silence—
a shadow
with fangs.
Intolerable.
Bone-crushing:
Were you real?
Did you witness?
Does blood
flow through your veins?
Did you see
me—

This piece is incredibly powerful and evocative. Stunning imagery !!
Strong. I felt the pain.